I would agree with #1 and #2 stated above. Try and keep it to the point. Now a day its best to keep a tracks length just long enough to say what its gotta say.
I also feel like the breakdown/ build up is a bit muddy and doesn’t quite compliment the second bust as well as it could. Possibly some automated hp filter sweeps and reverb pull/push would help that. Wet to dry right before the pause, then bam! Drop the claps/snare and ride out the rhythm to help accent the new phrase.